To be a star is a dream of many people.
There are a lot of advantages. Firstly, your work is very interesting and creative, you travel a lot, you always meet different people, your life looks like a big holiday! it's so active and fast-moving. Also you should be attractive and beautiful all time, because you are an icon for millions.
Besides, people, who work in the media world, as a rule become rich, their pains are high-paid.
But at the same time it is very difficult. Fans surround celebrities not only when they are on the stage, but they
hound stars in real life. They are in the public eye every time. Moreover, if you pursue this career, you become the main topic of gossip. Sometimes it isn't possible to save a private life.
Certainly, famous people have so common lacks such as a sleep debt, a permanent tiredness, a time handicap.
So, you should be ready for a career in the media world.
Liza,
ОтветитьУдалитьFirst of all, thanks for writing. This is a good summary of the pros and cons that the entertainment career entails. Thank you for your efforts, and also for using the new words appropriately, like you used the word "hound".
However, there are some things that I would like for you to improve:
1) the size of the paragraph is much shorter. I understand your desire to write as much as you want, but this is your first skill to develop when writing: an ability to cut out the unnecessary parts. Try to write 5-7 sentences, and organize them in ONE (not 5) paragraphs. After all, your assignment is to write one paragraph.
2)"their pains and high paid," maybe it's better to say "their efforts are paid-off" or "pay off."
"the main topic of gossip" you can also say "the main object of gossip," it sounds better.
"common lacks" better to say "common issues"
"sleep debt" - "lack of sleep"
"permanent tiredness" - "constant fatigue"
"time handicap" - "lack of time".
Sincerely,
Elena