Russia is very interesting, multicultural, ancient country. So it is very hard to mark only three things for which Russia is famous.
First of all, Russia is the largest country in the world, the country is situated on two continents -Europe and Asia.
Also Russia has the centuries-long history. For example, a lot of people know about destiny of Russia in the Second World War.
Finally, many outstanding writers, artists, actors, military leaders were born in this state. We are reading poems of A.S. Pushkin and listening music of Tchaikovsky up to date.
Liza, it's a very good and clear paragraph. You were able to name three things and briefly describe them. However, please try to write your paragraph as a single unit, that is, try NOT to start every sentence from a new line.
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1) A very interesting...... country
2) destiny of Russia sounds really awkward. How about saying "The role of Russia in...."
3) I would like you to correct the tense in the third sentence. We started reading Pushkin a long time ago, and even today we are reading it. "Up to date" means modern. Here you want to say here is "up to now." So, which tense form should you use in this sentence?